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lets play...Death day by ~sangoskittycat:iconsangoskittycat:

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"Tag your it!" the boy does call
blue eyes does turn to look
"you peeked!" she squeeked
laughter pierces through the green field of trees
gasping breathes and pounding feet are heard
blue eyes jerks to a stop
holding her head
the boy stops as well
worried
"what's wrong?"
his eyes probed through her thoughts and found nothing

BLUE EYES, BLUE EYES

blue eyes begins to cry
for this was a memory
of the day that he died
his body disaperates
only a shimmer still there

BLUE EYES, BLUE EYES

his words do call, but...
blue eyes does grow
he grows as well
his dark brown hair, covers his soft eyes
as he walks next to her
whispering to her of things to come
now, she worries

TODAY THE DAY HE DIED

"Blue eyes is Magic" he smiles and says
"she can see and speak with the dead!"
Blue eyes looks up...
blue rings encircle her piercing emerald green eyes
"Things" I say
"you must beware of things and times to come."
but again a vision rips across her thoughts

TODAY TODAY!!!!!

she screams and begins to cry
©2005-2009 ~sangoskittycat
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its more of a story and mix of poem than anything else
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~Earthbound-Angel:iconEarthbound-Angel: May 19, 2005, 1:14:54 PM
it's really sweet in a sad sort of way, I love the little bit of rhyming and the story between the girl and boy.

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~sangoskittycat:iconsangoskittycat: May 19, 2005, 1:20:20 PM
thank you...although it makes me extremely sad though...but yes thank you I like the story/poem too

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~Earthbound-Angel:iconEarthbound-Angel: May 19, 2005, 1:22:50 PM
you're welcome :D

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~sangoskittycat:iconsangoskittycat: May 19, 2005, 1:25:57 PM
it's nice to get comments that might help my esteem since it seems to suck...T.T

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You've no idea what you are about to get yourself into, especially if I'm involved. But if I'm involved someones going to wind up in jail...it's not going to be me.
~Earthbound-Angel:iconEarthbound-Angel: May 19, 2005, 1:29:17 PM
everyone goes through that though you know? Even the most self-assured people sometimes don't feel like their good enough, and you deserve to feel good about yourself

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~sangoskittycat:iconsangoskittycat: May 19, 2005, 1:35:17 PM
sure...but that's the problem the one's that actually deserve it can never get it

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You've no idea what you are about to get yourself into, especially if I'm involved. But if I'm involved someones going to wind up in jail...it's not going to be me.
~Earthbound-Angel:iconEarthbound-Angel: May 19, 2005, 1:39:47 PM
well despite what anyone says about you, even if the whole world is telling you that you will fail and that you aren't good enough, ultimately it is up to you to decide how you feel about yourself, because no amount of compliments can fill the gap of lack of self-worth coming from other people, YOU have to realize that you are an important person and you have to know that you are beautiful, and unique, and that no one in the world will ever be exactly like you.

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('')('') on his way to world domination.
~sangoskittycat:iconsangoskittycat: May 19, 2005, 1:40:52 PM
:giggle: I already kinda knew that...but thank you...

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You've no idea what you are about to get yourself into, especially if I'm involved. But if I'm involved someones going to wind up in jail...it's not going to be me.
~sangoskittycat:iconsangoskittycat: May 19, 2005, 1:41:38 PM
:giggle: I already kinda knew that...but thank you...

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You've no idea what you are about to get yourself into, especially if I'm involved. But if I'm involved someones going to wind up in jail...it's not going to be me.
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